Speed chapter 2 page 8

Seems to be a pretty good range of characters.
Also the background art is great.

Though I take it English is not your first language.
Well I'm terrible with other languages so I'm not
much to talk. But some of the text comes out
rather awkward sounding. Like it sounds backwards.

It may be better to write it instead in...You're from Brazil...so Portuguese, right? Write it in Portuguese and then see if you can find someone to translate it to English. Though I dunno
how difficult it will be to find someone willing to do that.
You may have to spend a little bit of money to hire a translator. Though sense both English and Portuguese are written with the Latin alphabet it should be easier than say Chinese to English.